Monday, November 15, 2010

Reflections on ES2007S

ES2007S is a module unlike any other I've taken in this course. If a university education is about preparing ourself for the future workplace, then ES2007S has achieved far more than any other module-it has led me to venture further in communication and other essential skills that will be a boon for life.

Communication

I have been exposed to effective writing and speaking. In terms of writing, the 7Cs is a fundamental principle which I will base all my current and future writing on. In this respect, I have learnt to be more concise and clear in consideration for my audience-an aspect I may not have focused on sufficiently before. In my first blog post, when my sentences were too loaded and insufficiently clear, I thank Brad and my fellow classmates/friends for pointing it out, both online and in person.

Through the writing of a proposal, cover letter, group editing, presentations and mock interviews, I have learnt how to be more persuasive and effective, both orally and in writing. For example, I appreciate Brad for personally spending time to teach me how to choose my words carefully in crafting an effective cover letter, that it may more likely appeal and impress the reader without sounding pompous. Both Brad and my my fellow classmates/friends have also pointed out to me so many fine details about presentation skills that it is unlikely I will be able to learn all this on my own. In fact, the experience of preparing for a presentation, to be critiqued honestly and constructively may surpass years of experience of giving presentations, because the former both accounts for and empowers one to see our blind spot. Last but not least, without the experience and skills of an effective and engaging educator like Brad, the advantage of his well-structured lessons may not have been fully leveraged upon.

Interactions in Class

Lessons by Brad have been fun, stimulating and amidst the rowdiness of a motley group of students, a deeper camaraderie within my project group, the Dandelions(pun unexpected but intended), has blossomed. Once again, credit should be given to Brad because as a teacher, he delicately treads the line between creativity/freedom of expression and regimented/structured. In doing so, he has achieved a fine balance. I respect Brad for being flexible enough to allow the class to air their opinions but without overdoing so that his lesson objectives are not met. I also recognise that Brad leads the way in diligence and being proactive. No other lecturer at NUS has entertained me with as much personal anecdotes, email reminders and a palpable sense of enthusiasm about his/her module!

My classmates have also been incredible, and even with differing personalities and expectations, we have learnt to work effectively, take calculated risks, and compromise when needed. It should therefore come to no surprise why Brad's class is different. Part of it is Brad's effectiveness as an educator; part of it, perchance, is the uniqueness of the dynamics of this class.

Blogging

In blogging, I have gained valuable new perspectives and ideas. I reckon that the greatest advantage of this medium of communication lies in the meticulous and creative planning and crafting of thoughts and ideas. I remember Brad, wee boon and yongxin's blog as particularly insightful as they highlight to me interesting perspectives of daily life. Brad's writing nearly epitomises efficiency in writing. Among so many well-written blogs, I remember Brad's one as being concise, clear, coherent and above all, it remains a highly interesting read. A good yardstick of the effectiveness of any blog is this-my willingness to read the blogs of ES2007S even after the academic motivation of scoring a better grade for this module is over.

And yes, I will read, almost everyone of the blogs in my ES2007S class. In fact, it has already been bookmarked in my browser!

Thank you Brad for excellence in education, and to everyone else in ES2007S for this journey in learning tools of the trade in effective communication. The friendship of this class remains~the 'makan session on Facebook' ;)
[Edited (grammar)]

17 comments:

  1. Thank you very much, You Sheng, for this well organized and detailed reflection. Of course, I appreciate the accolades (especially in the blogging category), but more importantly, it's nice to hear that you feel our work in ES2007S has served your needs and helped you in areas that required attention.

    Throughout the term as we obsess about the details in much of our work, we sometimes lose sight of the "bigger picture." You touch on that when you state that many of the comm skills we work on will be a "boon for life." I can't pretend to be an exemplary model for the way such skills enhance interpersonal relations, for example, but I do recognize their value, and what I saw happening in our classroom was that you and your group mates were making a sincere effort at first digesting these values and then putting them into play as you challenged assignment after assignment. Your own role in facilitating that learning process has been much appreciated, You Sheng. You showed a very positive attitude and a keen awareness of the the need for giving everything we did "your best shot."

    I wish you much success as you continue your learning journey!

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  2. Hey YS,

    It has truly been interesting, to say the least, working with you. You make every meeting we have lively and very insightful all at the same time.

    Class interaction is determined by the dynamics of the class and we have very dynamic people. I agree that the unorthodox style of ES2007S is something that allows it to stand out from the rest of the modules we take. It has truly been a course where life skills are taught and honed. Skills that affect us as people on this not-very-green-anymore earth. Skills that help us to become better people. Communication is a tool that we would use throughout our entire lives regardless of any and all environmental factor, save being stranded on an island alone. Coupled with the mentorship of a very motivated and vibrant tutor there really isn’t anymore we can ask for in a module.

    I think you have very efficiently surmised the course and the reading is very insightful into what you have gained from your time spent.

    It has been a journey of fun, excitement and of discovery being able to work with you. See you around in the future and all the best for your FYP!! au revoir... :)

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  3. Hello YS,

    Arigato! I think your post provided much insights, and really showed what you have learnt from this course. A very fluent post indeed! Regarding the interactions in class, I whole-heartedly agree with you, that the feedback/comments from our peers really shed a light on our 'blindspot'. I have learnt to be more accepting of criticisms and even see the value in them!

    My friend, this has been a most adventurous journey for you, hasn't it! I'm glad you enjoyed the whole process. It has been a great learning experience working with you and learning from you. Because you have such radical and different perspectives, it has challenged me to think seriously about mine as well. Your last blog post certainly showed what you have learnt about communication well - in terms of the language used.

    Study hard and all the way, future-colleague! :)

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  4. and once again... steph posts after me... :) need i say more?

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  5. @Brad: Your comment is very insightful. Thus, I hope that this ES2007S module which you teach will earn greater recognition from the authorities and popularity from students in NUS.

    @Daniel: Regarding the importance of communication, I have recognised it even before the start of the module. Now at the end of it, besides recognising its importance, I have also realised how much more there is to learn about communication. Zooming out from the academic microcosm of technical scientific theories and mathematics, we both agree on this "bigger" significance of communication.

    @Steph: Ahh thank you dear friend for recommending this class to me!
    Haha.. I see a 'ES2007S Recommendation Spiral': ... -> Steph's friend -> Steph -> Me -> Elin Wong -> Vanessa Huang -> ???)

    Similarly, it has been fun and awesome working with the Dandelions and Yong Chean :)

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  6. Thank you for your detailed sharing of what had you obtained in this course! In this post, you had once again illustrated the 7 'C's of powerful writing, especially 'concrete' and 'courteous'. You had 'clearly' conveyed your gratitude with specific examples. Besides English grammar and psychology, I think I have got so much more to learn from you, haha. :)

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  7. Thank you Elin! Haha we always learn from each other, remember? ;)

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  8. communication is really a huge topic isnt it.. and huge and interesting one. if only they had more of these courses around.. sigh... haha.. well cya around yah.. =D

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  9. @Daniel:
    There are quite a few communication courses out there, but one that would be as memorable and great, in terms of curriculum and experience, I wouldn't be so sure..(kudos to our tutor and classmates!)

    You Sheng, my TJC and PRIMER, who happens to be a neighbour(I live at Blk 9), it was great having you in class. As I had mentioned in the other post comment, I really admire the immense knowledge that you have, and your passion in them.
    Your post is clear(a word that is overused but true) and you subtle demonstrate your linguistic flair in the crafting of the sentences. Relative to the other posts, this has a personal touch to it, and I can absolutely imagine you voicing it in first person. This brings about a closeness where it is easier to relate to. =)

    I hope you would continue to blog, and I look forward to your writing. All the best!

    P.S. I have a confession. I have a small obession with the fish widget you have on the sight! It brings me joy to see them swim towards my cursor!!! (ok ok.. I admit it's a cheap thrill) Two things I noticed though:
    1. There is a pair for each colour, except for yellow and orange.
    2. One of the red fish is a little less responsive, and the orange fish sometimes goes out of the group before quickly swimming to the cursor again.

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  10. Hi YS,

    I think your reflection was very well crafted. You did not use much BIG words this time around but your sentence structure and style are both very engaging and also display your thought process, altogether highlighting the depth of your English and your uniqueness.

    It was very heartfelt as well. You put your appreciation in a very elegant manner and proceed to describe your experience in a colourful yet concise way. To a third person, this post may be a tad too impersonal, but your every sentence in there speaks YS!YS!YS!
    I have to say this is my favourite post of all of your post :D
    Very educating.

    I have an agenda here, and that is to present my humble peer review, if you’re ok with it :D

    I find You Sheng to be an eccentric and interesting persona. He seemed to have different thought process and unique perspective to add to our class, and I have to say that is very valuable, considering that many of us do think in a lateral way in general. In our proposal discussion, we spent more time going through and fro as there were many ideas proposed and debated. While that may seemed a time penalty, I found it crucial in crafting a creative and perfect proposal. On a different note, You Sheng’s ability to provide different perspective is particularly crucial in idea generation and obtaining feedback.

    You Sheng produces grade A work. He would spent time and effort to polish and improve on his work and on himself.
    He is also a perfectionist, from my observation and that was bad for our team. (We had 3 perfectionists!)
    He is very committed in his work and to his responsibility in all aspect of his life, a trait I believe we all highly value because it gives us assurance that he would not default on his commitment.
    Finally, You Sheng is very passionate about his commitment, his interest and his vision. It was clear in his dedication to his study, his knowledge of psychology and his pursuit of his dreams.

    Would I hire him? A definitive, NO. He would charge too much. And I can’t afford him. Haha, Gotcha!

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  11. dont worry YS!! i'll hire you.. i can afford it anyways... AHAHA!!! peanuts.. :)

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  12. @Weeboon: Thank you for the high praise from someone just as good with writing and creativity! Wow.. I didn’t realize you’re my neighbor too! Hey since that’s the case, next semester if you don’t mind carpooling, we can travel to and from school together if our timetables match in any way! It’ll be fun to have company and someone from the ‘Pharmily’ to talk with.. (Don’t worry, I have undergone 3.5 rigorous years of NUS ‘Chemistry’ education which helps me bond with people) =)

    Regarding the fish, I also don’t know why. Maybe each fish has his/her unique personality just like humans haha! Maybe the colours reflect certain traits due to concentration of neurotransmitters and/or hormones(e.g. red=less serotonin=less extraverted; orange=lots of adrenalin=swim out of group) Btw do you know you can actually feed the fishes?

    @ Yongxin: Thank you for your compliments; I hardly deserve the accolades although I can accept it as a self-fulfilling prophecy (and strive to be the person you mentioned me to be HAHA). Actually I also have a confession to make too. HAHA I treat this e portfolio like a game of whim whereby I was trying on different styles of writing according to my mood. Previously I took too long to write my blog posts. Because I was under stress to quickly finish this blog post, I just poured out my thoughts into this blog post in ~40 minutes and was not able to use/consider any bombastic words. On hindsight, I think that is why it seemed more heartfelt. Besides that, the appreciation I felt for everyone in the class was genuine!

    However, I admit that I focused a lot on Brad and pedagogy. Part of the reason why this post had a minor theme on his education styles is due to my vested interest as a teacher and therefore, I tried to observe and learn from Brad’s effective teaching techniques. The other reason is because we rarely have the chance to pour out our appreciation and communicate in a more personal level to our teacher than to our friends/classmates whom we have the chance to see and interact so often.

    I am eccentric because my traits are similar to the Myers Briggs Type Indicator (MBTI) profile of an ENFJ, which is relatively rare for a male. I have so many weaknesses, e.g. the tendency to overlook details(sometimes important ones) and being a less down-to-earth perfectionist than the one you are. So I will not thrive without the help of more sensible and experienced friends like you, Daniel and Stephanie are! Please think again, are you sure you want to hire me? HAHA!

    @ Daniel: Yes please! Please pay my breach of MOE contract, ~$160,000 (~1 BMW 320).

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  13. P.S. Do you all know you can feed my fish by clicking on the 'pond'? HAHA! :P

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  14. Hi You Sheng,

    This is one great post, very concise and clear! I always marvel at your strength in written English. The way you write is really professional. Reading your blogs have helped me to write better. =D

    The effort that you put in for every assignments are evident for all to see, the amount of preparation you've done for each assignment and presentation were extensive and that spirit of excellence was something that I believe will help you to excel, even as a teacher. Keep it up, You Sheng! Your dedication towards your study and work will definitely be a great blessing to your future students.=D

    Very glad to have known you in this class and worked together with you for peer teaching. Despite the differences (which I think it's largely the Engin and Science thing...), we did pull off a great peer teaching =D

    YC

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  15. purlsss, Daniel owns 24% of DSEM Corp. which is trading at $24 a piece. He can buy you out like feeding the fish in the pond.

    Oh, ENFJ. One of my biz prof is such a person. Did you validate yourself or took an evaluation?

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  16. yes.. all the fishes go crazy thou.. haha.. well we'll have to put you on probation first.. im sorry.. we wont bear any liabilities before you join us.. :) strictly business.. :)

    @YX.. im sorry but what's that!? I have a 49.9% controlling stake in DSME's Weapons Development and Production (WDP) Corp. which just posted a USD100 Billion year on year revenue. =D hahaha!!! oh boy.. back to studying!! :)

    p.s i have no idea what im saying!!! AHAH!!!

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  17. @Yongxin: HAHAHA My "ENFJness" is apparent enough for everyone to see!

    Tested many times alr.. even my Big 5/OCEAN/MMPI-II and DISC tests gives consistent results with my ENFJness...

    I wonder how your biz prof is like...

    @ Daniel: Hello boss, can give us treat after exams??? ;)

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